Forever, Rena - A Star Ocean 2 Story

Sarah's Knight · 11-05-2008, 07:00 AM

... After seeking some council on where to appropriately place a thread of this caliber, for I harbor no memory of fanfiction stories written by a forums member ever having appeared around here before, I have chosen to upload a story based off the anime-esque RPG known as Star Ocean: The Second Story that will hopefully meet the approval of all Star Ocean fans on the forums who read this, be they fans of the RPG or the corresponding anime series. I really do not remember what prompted me to write this story so many years ago when I was a child still in high school, but I found myself unusually proud of having done so and kept it ever since in hopes of finding a place on the Net where it might be received by others.

Should you be so gracious as to take the time to read through this rather lengthy story, please post and let me know your opinions of it. Even though I have no further aspirations to become a professional writer as I once had, I still welcome constructive criticism for my use of grammar and such by those members whom might be well-educated in literacy.

... My apologies also to the readers for whatever formatting problems might have occurred when I made the conversion from a Microsoft Word to a notepad document.

Pruvmerong · 11-05-2008, 07:05 AM

The only Star Ocean I've played is SO3. Will this story make any sense to me?

NamShub1337 · 11-05-2008, 11:14 AM

again much make you think a lot about your mysterious past,

I believe you meant must instead of much, use the find function to fix it. (CTRL+F)

I like the story, it's interesting because I played the game SO long ago. My favorite character was the medicine guy. I think his name started with a 'B' and I want to say his name is Bromis but I think that's wrong. I'll keep reading and if I find an error I'll let you know.

Also... How picky do you want us readers to be when we point out errors. I read a few sentences that seemed awkward but they worked out with good grammar. Either way.

**Blanchimont** · 11-05-2008, 11:45 AM

I remember this game^^...

Only complaint I had was, that the aftergame bonus dungeon had a nasty habit of crashing the game every once in a while, and considering you couldn't save there, well

...

Sarah's Knight · 11-05-2008, 05:12 PM

Quote:

I believe you meant must instead of much, use the find function to fix it. (CTRL+F)

I like the story, it's interesting because I played the game SO long ago. My favorite character was the medicine guy. I think his name started with a 'B' and I want to say his name is Bromis but I think that's wrong. I'll keep reading and if I find an error I'll let you know.

... Yes, you are right; I meant "must" instead of "much". I cannot believe that I never managed to find such an error in all of these years.

.... And I believe that the name of the person you are speaking of is "Bowman", sir.

cyal8erloser · 11-05-2008, 05:15 PM

Downloaded it, will read it tonight.

I might even type you a little review to shatter your dreams and feeble attempts at writing.

jk.....or am I. Anyway, tanksfor the reading material. Will look at it very soon.

Sarah's Knight · 11-05-2008, 05:49 PM

@ cya ->
I will be looking forward to hearing of your opinion. sir.

TANAKA · 11-05-2008, 07:05 PM

A Star Ocean 2 TVanime is every good

**Blanchimont** · 11-05-2008, 07:25 PM

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Originally Posted by TANAKA

A Star Ocean 2 TVanime is every good

Too bad it only run the first half of the storyline of the game >.>...

Sarah's Knight · 11-05-2008, 08:23 PM

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Too bad it only run the first half of the storyline of the game >.>...

... As well as volume 4 of that series in particular having sucked immensely.

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Pruvmerong Spam Slayer™ Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: /root/hentai Posts: 207 Points: 155.16 Bank: 7,074.31 Total Points: 7,229.47 Donate	The only Star Ocean I've played is SO3. Will this story make any sense to me? __________________ Current Number of DaT Girls in My Harem: 3 http://bleakcosmos.nxserve.net

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NamShub1337 Nam Shub Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 91 Points: 5,314.71 Bank: 1,144.11 Total Points: 6,458.82 Donate	again much make you think a lot about your mysterious past, I believe you meant must instead of much, use the find function to fix it. (CTRL+F) I like the story, it's interesting because I played the game SO long ago. My favorite character was the medicine guy. I think his name started with a 'B' and I want to say his name is Bromis but I think that's wrong. I'll keep reading and if I find an error I'll let you know. Also... How picky do you want us readers to be when we point out errors. I read a few sentences that seemed awkward but they worked out with good grammar. Either way. __________________

11-05-2008, 11:45 AM	#4 (permalink)
Blanchimont Dreamer through Time Join Date: May 2007 Location: Finland Posts: 552 Images: 5 Points: 36,373.26 Bank: 2,197,659.17 Total Points: 2,234,032.43 Donate	I remember this game^^... Only complaint I had was, that the aftergame bonus dungeon had a nasty habit of crashing the game every once in a while, and considering you couldn't save there, well... __________________ "Never bring tears to a woman's eyes! It's our job to protect them!!" Narutaki, Steam Detectives .

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Sarah's Knight Servant of Faerie Queen! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: The Forest Relic Posts: 1,438 Images: 26 Points: 1,752.94 Bank: 2,796.52 Total Points: 4,549.46 Donate	@ cya -> I will be looking forward to hearing of your opinion. sir. __________________ (Some of these sigs are courtesy of the beautiful KiraRin and the artistic and sweet Miss Ani. )

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cyal8erloser Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Fissure of Woe Posts: 389 Images: 1735 Points: 31,780.92 Bank: 7,136.55 Total Points: 38,917.47 Donate	Downloaded it, will read it tonight. I might even type you a little review to shatter your dreams and feeble attempts at writing. jk.....or am I. Anyway, tanksfor the reading material. Will look at it very soon.

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